Slides for ICANN 63 - your input required
All, I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better. Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove. Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email. I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great. Thank you, Dennis
Dear Dennis, Thanks for sharing the slides. I have gone through it and it looks great. However I have minor comments. In slide 3 where the phrase "single source" appears I would suggest to replace it with "single source or repository". Somewhere in the slides particularly on the slide that describes the scope I feel the need to emphasize the SG's scope in general terms like the SG is scoped to address "Technical Issues related to RZ_LGR". Slide 7 looks to me redundant and I suggest its removal. Kind regards, Dessalegn On Wed, Sep 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG < rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> wrote:
All,
I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better.
Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove.
Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email.
I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great.
Thank you,
Dennis
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Looks good Dennis. No additional comments than what Dessalegn made. Regards, Gaurav [image: Visit Dominion.Domains] <http://dominion.domains/> *Gaurav Vedi* | *Director Registry Operations *| *Dominion Domains* Office 757.351.7353 <(757)-351-7353> | Mobile 240-751-8792 <(240)-751-8792> gaurav.vedi@dominion.domains Dominion Domains is a division of Dominion Enterprises | 150 Granby Street, Norfolk, VA 23510 On Thu, Sep 27, 2018 at 4:30 AM Dessalegn Yehuala < mequanint.yehuala@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear Dennis, Thanks for sharing the slides. I have gone through it and it looks great. However I have minor comments. In slide 3 where the phrase "single source" appears I would suggest to replace it with "single source or repository". Somewhere in the slides particularly on the slide that describes the scope I feel the need to emphasize the SG's scope in general terms like the SG is scoped to address "Technical Issues related to RZ_LGR". Slide 7 looks to me redundant and I suggest its removal.
Kind regards, Dessalegn
On Wed, Sep 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG < rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> wrote:
All,
I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better.
Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove.
Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email.
I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great.
Thank you,
Dennis
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Dessalegn Yehuala -
Gaurav Vedi -
Tan Tanaka, Dennis