Looks good Dennis. No additional comments than what Dessalegn made. Regards, Gaurav [image: Visit Dominion.Domains] <http://dominion.domains/> *Gaurav Vedi* | *Director Registry Operations *| *Dominion Domains* Office 757.351.7353 <(757)-351-7353> | Mobile 240-751-8792 <(240)-751-8792> gaurav.vedi@dominion.domains Dominion Domains is a division of Dominion Enterprises | 150 Granby Street, Norfolk, VA 23510 On Thu, Sep 27, 2018 at 4:30 AM Dessalegn Yehuala < mequanint.yehuala@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear Dennis, Thanks for sharing the slides. I have gone through it and it looks great. However I have minor comments. In slide 3 where the phrase "single source" appears I would suggest to replace it with "single source or repository". Somewhere in the slides particularly on the slide that describes the scope I feel the need to emphasize the SG's scope in general terms like the SG is scoped to address "Technical Issues related to RZ_LGR". Slide 7 looks to me redundant and I suggest its removal.
Kind regards, Dessalegn
On Wed, Sep 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM Tan Tanaka, Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG < rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> wrote:
All,
I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better.
Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove.
Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email.
I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great.
Thank you,
Dennis
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