Just to clarify, the last sentence was directed at the IAG, not Allen. Thanks. Best, Jamie Jamie Hedlund VP, Strategic Programs Global Domains Division ICANN +1.202.374.3969 (m) +1.202.570.7125 (d) jamie.hedlund@icann.org From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:37 To: Allen Grogan <allen.grogan@icann.org<mailto:allen.grogan@icann.org>>, Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu<mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report Thank you, Allen. In light of the extensive edits, please review and indicate whether you have any concerns or objections. Thank you. Best, Jamie Jamie Hedlund VP, Strategic Programs Global Domains Division ICANN +1.202.374.3969 (m) +1.202.570.7125 (d) jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org> From: Allen Grogan <allen.grogan@icann.org<mailto:allen.grogan@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:31 To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>>, Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu<mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report Can't guarantee the accuracy, but I believe the attached redline reflects the changes proposed by Christopher. Note that some language consisting of hyperlinks in the original document shows up here in blue (meaning it looks like it is a change to the document even though it isn't). Regards, Allen R. Grogan Chief Contract Compliance Officer direct: + 1 310 578-8932 mobile: +1 310 795-8206 allen.grogan@icann.org<mailto:allen.grogan@icann.org> 12025 Waterfront Drive Suite 300 Los Angeles, CA 90094-2536 United States of America From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 11:14 AM To: Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu<mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report Christopher, I will do my best to identify your changes. Regarding your Appendix 3 and other requests to provide a minority statement, it does not seem appropriate to include these in a document on which public comment is sought. Rather, minority statements are incorporated into final reports. At that point, public comments have been considered and the group has identified where there is consensus. It would be appropriate for minority views to be submitted as public comment. If, after taking into account the universe of public comments, these views do not generate consensus support, they would be ripe for attachment to the final report as minority statements. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns with this approach. Thank you. Best, Jamie Jamie Hedlund VP, Strategic Programs Global Domains Division ICANN +1.202.374.3969 (m) +1.202.570.7125 (d) jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu<mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:00 To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report No, Jamie, there are a number of amendments and additions in the body of the text. Since your version is in .docx and my edits are in .odt, track changes does not seem to work. (I do not know how to do 'red-lining') I suggest that if you do a 'compare documents' you will get the changes. Otherwise: Search for 'N.B.' and for 'applicable'' and you will get most of them. Regards CW On 17 Sep 2015, at 19:50, Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>> wrote: Christopher, Thank you. Could you please confirm that the only change you made to the base text was the addition of Appendix 3? Since the document is not redlined I wanted to make sure we captured your proposed edits. Thanks again. Best, Jamie Jamie Hedlund VP, Strategic Programs Global Domains Division ICANN +1.202.374.3969 (m) +1.202.570.7125 (d) jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu<mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 13:24 To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund@icann.org<mailto:jamie.hedlund@icann.org>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>" <whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org<mailto:whois-iag-volunteers@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report Good evening: Please find attached my edits to the draft preliminary report. With many thanks for your attention Regards Christopher Wilkinson