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WP4 Deliverable: Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human RIghts
by Greg Shatan Dec. 25, 2015

Dec. 25, 2015

All: Attached are Word and PDF versions of a proposed final draft of the deliverable of WP4, which is intended to become part of the next Report of the CCWG. Niels and Tatiana and Matt went through the document after our call and edited and resolved the proposed changes in the document. I followed with further edits and formatting work. I believe that all of us sought to be neutral *rapporteurs* carrying out the sense of today's call and the work of our group. I felt that we needed a section which specifically set out the process and results of our discussions on refining the language of the Bylaw, rather than leaving this to our recommendations in the final section of the document. Therefore, I took the liberty of creating such a section, and hope that you will find that this section reflects our work. This document also remains available on Google Drive. I look forward to any comments. Best regards, Greg

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Revised bylaw language by counsel
by León Felipe Sánchez Ambía Nov. 6, 2015

Nov. 6, 2015

Dear all, As per our action items in our last call, I requested that our lawyers had a look at our document and checked on the proposed bylaw wording. Attached are the redline and clean versions of the work our counsel did. I believe this could be, subject to this group’s consensus, the final version for inclusion in our 3rd proposal. Looking forward for your feedback. Best regards, León

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Current Doc in PDF with all marked changes
by Greg Shatan Nov. 2, 2015

Nov. 2, 2015

This is what we are discussing.

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current Doc
by Greg Shatan Nov. 2, 2015

Nov. 2, 2015

the current doc

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