Dear all, Unfortunately I wasn’t able to attend the call. In any case, as I have not seen any reaction to my email I have included our change proposals in the Google Doc. Regards Jorge Cancio Von: wp4-bounces@icann.org [mailto:wp4-bounces@icann.org] Im Auftrag von Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch Gesendet: Freitag, 18. September 2015 12:26 An: leonfelipe@sanchez.mx; wp4@icann.org Cc: acct-staff@icann.org Betreff: Re: [Wp4] Merged document Dear Leon, dear all, We have had a look at the proposed document and would like to suggest the following changes to the proposed Bylaws wording: - eliminate „fundamental“, as all human rights need to be respected; - add „…and other international human rights instruments“ as the UDHR does not cover all affected human rights; Thanks for considering this. Best regards Jorge Cancio Von: wp4-bounces@icann.org<mailto:wp4-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:wp4-bounces@icann.org] Im Auftrag von León Felipe Sánchez Ambía Gesendet: Freitag, 18. September 2015 08:20 An: wp4@icann.org<mailto:wp4@icann.org> Cc: ACCT-Staff <acct-staff@icann.org<mailto:acct-staff@icann.org>> Betreff: [Wp4] Merged document Dear all, In anticipation for our call on Human Rights, here is the link to the merged document that I suggest we use to continue our work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15t32Y7DyzGCAR21XT9koN9y2hNK_nAifuNZGwaFf... What I did is to try to capture our discussions and agreements and merge the document with what Greg put together last time so we can build the explanatory note from there. A proposed agenda for tomorrow is: 1. Welcome and Roll call (2 minutes) 2. Review of draft bylaw wording (28 minutes) 3. Advance discussion on explanatory note (25 minutes) 4. AOB (5 minutes) Please feel free to suggest amendments to the proposed agenda. Best regards, León