Apologies for my absence at the last meeting. Following my comments. *Request # 1:* Sentence: *“The group recommends the formation of an ad hoc diversity group across the ICANN community when there is a discernible increase in trends related to diversity matters.”* My comment: I would replace the word* "discernible" *with* "quantifiable or persistent".* Some measurable* expression needs to be in place to activate a committee.* Sentence: *“This ad hoc group would be tasked with providing valuable advice to the Ombudsman or ICANN on diversity complaints and issues."* My comment: I feel comfortable with the statement. Sentence: *“The identification of these trends, and the possible formation of an ad hoc diversity group may arise from the Continuous Improvement Program or future Holistic Reviews.”* My comment: Agree with the statement as is. Best, Alfredo Calderon eLearning Consultant https://aprendizajedistancia.blogspot.com calderon.alfredo@gmail.com | wiseintro.co/alfredocalderon | Alfredo_1212 | Virtual School on Internet Governance | https://virtualsig.org <http://facebook.com/calderon.alfredo> <http://pr.linkedin.com/in/acalderon52> <http://twitter.com/acalderon52> <http://www.pinterest.com/acalderon/> <http://www.slideshare.net/acalderon> <http://twitter.com/virtualschoolIG> <http://wiseintro.co/alfredocalderon> IMPORTANT: The contents of this email and any attachments are confidential. They are intended for the named recipient(s) only. If you have received this email by mistake, please notify the sender immediately and do not disclose the contents to anyone or make copies thereof. Create your own email signature <https://www.wisestamp.com/create-own-signature/?utm_source=promotion&utm_med...> On Fri, Aug 18, 2023 at 9:42 AM Alperen Eken <alperen.eken@icann.org> wrote:
Dear Community Coordination Group Participants,
I hope this email finds you well.
The attendance to our meeting on 1 August 2023 was lower compared to our previous meetings. However, some issues were raised during the meeting regarding the recommendation section of the report. In addition to recommendation 1.7, recommendation 3.1 was explained to the group during our last meeting. This email will include *an agenda* for the next meeting, and *two action requests* from the participants of CCG.
*REQUEST #1:*
You can find the recommendation section of the report that requests your comments, please send your response for each sentence below to the list before *23 August 2023 23:59UTC*, if there are no responses to the paragraph as a whole, the report will be finalized.
“The group recommends the formation of an ad hoc diversity group across the ICANN community when there is a discernible increase in trends related to diversity matters.”
*Your comment: *
“This ad hoc group would be tasked with providing valuable advice to the Ombudsman or ICANN on diversity complaints and issues.”
*Your comment: *
“The identification of these trends, and the possible formation of an ad hoc diversity group may arise from the Continuous Improvement Program or future Holistic Reviews.”
*Your comment: *
*REQUEST #2:*
As explained during the last meeting, and stated in the formation of the WS2 CCG, participants may wish to share information about implementation efforts related to Recommendation 3.1 (Human Rights Framework). You can find Human Rights Framework of Interpretation Final Report and Recommendations here <https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/ccwg-acct-ws2-final-24jun18-en.p...> on p.79 (Annex 3).
*The request from participants from Supporting Organizations and Advisory Committees is to report on their groups’ activities to this mailing list related to HR-FOI (Rec 3.1) before our meeting on 7 September 2023 20:00UTC. Activities in your groups will be shared during the meeting.*
*AGENDA:*
1. Welcome *(Melissa)* 2. Activities of SOs and ACs related to HR-FOI *(ALAC, GAC, RSSAC, SSAC, GNSO, ccNSO participants)* 3. Introduction to recommendation 2.3 (if time permits) *(Alp)*
If there is anything we can assist you with, please let us know.
Best regards,
Alp (on behalf of the ICANN org team supporting the WS2 CCG) _______________________________________________ ws2-ccg mailing list ws2-ccg@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ws2-ccg
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