[Ws2-diversity] CCWG-Accountability-WS2-Diversity Draft Recommendations - suggested edits

All, As per the Diversity Rapporteurs request please find attached my suggested edits to the Diversity recommendations for consideration on our next call. I have tried to be very faithful to the original intents in most cases and have added a few things that seemed to be required and consistent with the other recommendations. The biggest overall change is that I found a number or the original recommendations overlapped which usually causes issues - as such I have cleaned this without hopefully changing any intents. Bernard Turcotte ICANN Staff Support to the CCWG-Accountability-WS2