Hi Lori, Thanks for this... I hope my brief read over and very minor edit (format) comment both for page 5 are not a sign of a "... ... forrests and trees' issue from me, but I thought the doc was just fine... So minor format and edit points page 5... unless in response to our Q2 to ICANN Legal, we are quoting them with the TBD , I suggest we replace that placeholder with a term like 'pending' / 'yet to be received' or some such... And... Just one of my personal niggles is orphaned text so I please check if on your master doc, as I use android OS so it might be just my display, if we can ensure that the subheader 2. Escalation is connected and not on a separate page to its following text... Thanks again... On 21 Jan 2017 8:43 AM, "Lori Schulman" <lschulman@inta.org> wrote:
Dear Team,
Per Wednesday’s call, attached please find an updated draft of the report with “Legal” section included. I have marked where the ICANN Legal Opinion will be inserted.
Please use the list for feedback or submit redlines. I will incorporate any new comments into the next draft for our meeting on Wednesday, January 25. Please be ready to discuss nonetheless.
Have a good weekend.
Lori Schulman
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