Editorial comment: The first sentence of the Background section could reasonably end after the word "Government". The subsequent comma and comment detract from the clarity of the scope statement. Eric Brunner-Williams Eugene, Oregon On 1/22/15 5:07 AM, Alice Jansen wrote:
Dear all, On behalf of the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs, please find attached a draft statement (Frankfurt – 19-20 January) for your consideration. Please flag any edits and/or comments you may have by* today – Thursday, 22 January - **17:00 UTC*. Thank you Best regards Alice
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