Hi Greg, Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i wordings is maintained as it currently is. Regards sent from Google nexus 4 kindly excuse brevity and typos. On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:
All.
I have read this draft and I have no objections. I have made a few non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up Eduardo's comments (though I did not find the "tabs" to be an issue), adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it, making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.
In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA functions operator as "the unit that provides the service."
With these changes, I find the document acceptable.
Greg Shatan
On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <ajs@anvilwalrusden.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be accepted this way.
Best regards,
A
On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:
Dear All,
As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April, and we have had several iterations on the document.
As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a compromise among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.
I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.
Best regards,
Lise
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