September 2015 - Gnso-ppsai1

Proposed draft text for WG Final Report on Sub Team 1 recommendations
by Mary Wong Sept. 21, 2015

Sept. 21, 2015

Dear all, The WG co-chairs have asked if we can circulate some proposed draft text to the full WG that incorporates and reflects the Sub Team¹s analysis and WG conclusions following our last report. I have prepared the attached document that is a redline/markup of the original text from the Initial Report. The idea is that, once this text is finalized, it will be inserted into the Final Report as an update to what was put out for public comment. Please let me know if you have any objections to my circulating the attached document to the WG, preferably before the call tomorrow if that¹s possible. If you have suggestions for improvements, please let me know as well. Thank you! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org

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WG call tomorrow (Tuesday 8 September)
by Mary Wong Sept. 7, 2015

Sept. 7, 2015

Hello Sub Team 1 members Marika and I have just gotten off a call with the WG co-chairs, who would like to suggest that the sub team present a short overview of what was updated in the documents circulated on Friday. Presumably that would be Alex for Question 1 and Val for Question 2? Alex and Val, let me know if that is all right with you. Marika and I will of course be on hand to lend whatever assistance and support you think you might need (which may likely be none!). Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org From: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org> Date: Saturday, September 5, 2015 at 10:48 To: "gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg(a)icann.org> Subject: Proposed final drafts for WG discussion/review from Sub Team 1 > Dear WG members, > > Please find attached the updated documents (first presented as Sub Team 1¹s > initial report a few weeks ago) from Sub Team 1. For Question 1, the Sub Team > decided to propose some updated language for the relay escalation process > (shown in ³redline² in the document). For Question 2, the Sub Team has updated > its report/document following the WG¹s discussion, and its recommendations are > highlighted in yellow in the attached document. > > Please note that while both documents have been circulated to the full Sub > Team, not all Sub Team members have had the chance to comment on the latest > language. Nevertheless, as the group¹s agreed intent was to update the > original report documents following Sub Team review and WG discussion, and in > view of the long holiday weekend in the United States, these documents are > being circulated for your review now. > > Please feel free to raise any questions or discussion points for Sub Team 1 > via email to this list. > > Thanks and cheers > Mary > > Mary Wong > Senior Policy Director > Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) > Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 > Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > >

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Proposed Final Sub Team 1 Report for Question 2 (LEA and other Non-IP Owner Requests)
by Mary Wong Sept. 4, 2015

Sept. 4, 2015

Dear all, Please find attached an updated version of the Question 2 summary document that was presented by Val to the full WG last week. As agreed, I’ve added in what I think was the WG’s agreed course of further action (where there was one) from the discussion - these are highlighted in yellow for your review. I’ve also added a title and headings as well as edited some typos and such, but otherwise I’ve not messed with the substance of the summary analysis that was in Val’s document. It will be great if you can review this as well as the updated summary for Question 1 that Alex sent around on Friday 28 August at your earliest convenience, so that we can send agreed final versions of both documents to the full WG, preferably before the end of this week. BTW Lindsay - thanks for checking in even while on vacation, not just on this but also on Sub Team 2! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org -----Original Message----- From: Lindsay Hamilton-Reid <Lindsay.Hamilton-Reid(a)fasthosts.com> Date: Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 23:09 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong(a)icann.org>, "gnso-ppsai1(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai1(a)icann.org> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai1] question 1 recommendations. >Hi Mary > >Agree with the plan - it's my first day back from holiday but I will take >a final look at the documents and try to come back to you by Thursday if >I have any comments. > >Many thanks > >Lindsay > >-----Original Message----- >From: gnso-ppsai1-bounces(a)icann.org >[mailto:gnso-ppsai1-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong >Sent: 31 August 2015 16:59 >To: gnso-ppsai1(a)icann.org >Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai1] question 1 recommendations. > >Hello everyone, and thanks, Alex! > >Does anyone have any comments on the updated document, in particular the >revised language on escalation? It would be good if we can send the >finalized language and document to the full WG this week. In similar >vein, does anyone have any further notes or input on the other questions >based on the WG¹s discussion following Val¹s summary of our work this >past Tuesday? If not, I will incorporate the WG¹s suggestions into the >summary document and circulate it to you and then the full WG (assuming >you are fine with it), again, hopefully this week. > >Will this work? > > >Thanks and cheers >Mary > >Mary Wong >Senior Policy Director >Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 >Email: mary.wong(a)icann.org > > > > >-----Original Message----- >From: <gnso-ppsai1-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of "Deacon, Alex" ><Alex_Deacon(a)mpaa.org> >Date: Friday, August 28, 2015 at 23:49 >To: "gnso-ppsai1(a)icann.org" <gnso-ppsai1(a)icann.org> >Subject: [Gnso-ppsai1] question 1 recommendations. > >>Hi all, >> >>Apologies for the delay. Here is the update to the doc on question one >>including draft recommendations for review. >> >>Have a great weekend. >> >>Alex >>

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question 1 recommendations.
by Deacon, Alex Sept. 1, 2015

Sept. 1, 2015

Hi all, Apologies for the delay. Here is the update to the doc on question one including draft recommendations for review. Have a great weekend. Alex

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