Oct. 5, 2019
8:22 a.m.
Hi Dennis, Thanks for sharing the file. I’ll think about a different wording but anyone is welcome to suggest something. Best, Meikal Am 4. Okt. 2019, 18:53 +0200 schrieb Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka@verisign.com>:
Meikal,
Here is the revised version of the document https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asf9ecnyX4rkK3pyQMzDuH8YY5-eXw8quZ6guDiU...
Could you (and others too) review the highlighted section? I think it could be re-worded better (or remove altogether because it doesn’t make sense to me).
Thanks, Dennis