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Rec3 Subgroup - Draft for updates
by Lisa Phifer July 31, 2018

July 31, 2018

Dear Alan, Attached please find an updated draft of the Rec3 Outreach subgroup's section, including all F2F#3 agreements. Please use the attached to carry out your assigned action items this week, remembering to leave 'track changes' on to redline your edits. Alice will be distributing the meeting report with a list of action items and due dates separately. Best Regards Lisa

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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach] Outreach Draft - v08
by Alan Greenberg July 23, 2018

July 23, 2018

And thanks to Lisa for pointing out I neglected to add my attachments.... At 22/07/2018 11:06 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote: >I have incorporated the recommendation previous numbers 4.4 from the >Compliance section, on the need for documentation and outreach and >education on filing WHOIS inaccuracy reports. > >I also inserted the Findings Summary (placed at the end of the >Findings Section where it seems to fit) giving the original WHOIS >Rec a rating of Partially Implemented. > >Alan

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Outreach Draft - v08
by Alan Greenberg July 23, 2018

July 23, 2018

I have incorporated the recommendation previous numbers 4.4 from the Compliance section, on the need for documentation and outreach and education on filing WHOIS inaccuracy reports. I also inserted the Findings Summary (placed at the end of the Findings Section where it seems to fit) giving the original WHOIS Rec a rating of Partially Implemented. Alan

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For Plenary: Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg June 3, 2018

June 3, 2018

I have had no comments on the version of the draft report I sent out last week, so I am assuming SubGroup approval. I have removed the reference to outreach to security professionals, and inserted the question to the entire RT as to whether we want to proceed with the Recommendation on further outreach. I will submit it to the RT. Alan

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Revised Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg May 27, 2018

May 27, 2018

Team, attached is a revised draft including Carlton's changes (after accepting the previous set) as well as PDF version with line numbers. Please review and provide any thoughts, comments or changes. I would like to send out to the full RT prior to tomorrow's meeting. Alan

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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach] Revised Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg May 27, 2018

May 27, 2018

Carlton, thanks for the careful prooef-reading and editing. Any ideas on other potential non-ICANN outreach targets. I am not comfortable reissuing a recommendation, even to consider such outreach, if we cannot come up with more viable examples. Alan At 21/05/2018 11:09 PM, Carlton Samuels wrote: >I made a few [tracked] changes and a comment. > >-Carlton > > >============================== >Carlton A Samuels >Mobile: 876-818-1799 >Strategy, Process, Governance, Assessment & Turnaround >============================= > >On Sun, May 20, 2018 at 11:02 PM, Alan Greenberg ><<mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>alan.greenberg(a)mcgill.ca> wrote: >Team, please review and provide any thoughts, comments or changes. > >Alan >_______________________________________________ >RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach mailing list ><mailto:RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach@icann.org>RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach(a)icann.org >https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-outreach > > >Content-Type: >application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document; > name="Subgroup1-Rec3Outreach-Report-Draft-v02_20180520 with > edits and comments by Carlton May 21.docx" >Content-Disposition: attachment; > filename="Subgroup1-Rec3Outreach-Report-Draft-v02_20180520 > with edits and comments by Carlton May 21.docx" >X-Attachment-Id: f_jhh3ouap2 >X-Microsoft-Exchange-Diagnostics: > >1;YTOPR01MB0396;27:jZCPXMyghat1t4BueJF2pfVPBqQSTuoIzgUoVHkQ/dBPD7awH0faWGX0E1JRqlsWStn74ZH4wuZHmeH3gByx6M751TwqU50Oa3q2r66QhOmleoZQpQh8+/dfCSifaN00 >X-Microsoft-Antispam-Message-Info: > >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Reminder: deadline to submit subgroup report
by Jean-Baptiste Deroulez May 23, 2018

May 23, 2018

Dear WHOIS1 Rec #3: Outreach subgroup members, We would like to kindly remind you that tomorrow – 24 May 23:59 UTC is the agreed deadline to submit your subgroup report to the review team. The latest version of your report is saved here: https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604708/Subgroup1-Rec3Out… . Your dedicated subgroup wiki page: https://community.icann.org/x/5JlEB . Similar to the preparatory work for the draft report you presented in Brussels, your ICANN support team is available to help you reflect Brussels discussions into your final report. If you need ICANN org to provide suggested language, please reach out to us at rds-whois2-staff(a)icann.org<mailto:rds-whois2-staff@icann.org>. Kind regards, Jean-Baptiste

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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach] Revised Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg May 22, 2018

May 22, 2018

Thanks Carlton. Regarding out reach to security researchers, you are right, but I am stretching to find some viable examples of who we should have outreached to! If there are not many, then we should enumerate those that we know and not make it a general recommendation. I am already hedging bets by not actually saying we should do outreach, but based on the post-GDPR world, we should THEN consider what outreach, if any, is needed. But some concrete examples would make this more believable! Alan At 21/05/2018 11:09 PM, Carlton Samuels wrote: >I made a few [tracked] changes and a comment. > >-Carlton > > >============================== >Carlton A Samuels >Mobile: 876-818-1799 >Strategy, Process, Governance, Assessment & Turnaround >============================= > >On Sun, May 20, 2018 at 11:02 PM, Alan Greenberg ><<mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>alan.greenberg(a)mcgill.ca> wrote: >Team, please review and provide any thoughts, comments or changes. > >Alan >_______________________________________________ >RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach mailing list ><mailto:RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach@icann.org>RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach(a)icann.org >https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-outreach > > >Content-Type: >application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document; > name="Subgroup1-Rec3Outreach-Report-Draft-v02_20180520 with > edits and comments by Carlton May 21.docx" >Content-Disposition: attachment; > filename="Subgroup1-Rec3Outreach-Report-Draft-v02_20180520 > with edits and comments by Carlton May 21.docx" >X-Attachment-Id: f_jhh3ouap2 >X-Microsoft-Exchange-Diagnostics: > >1;YTOPR01MB0396;27:jZCPXMyghat1t4BueJF2pfVPBqQSTuoIzgUoVHkQ/dBPD7awH0faWGX0E1JRqlsWStn74ZH4wuZHmeH3gByx6M751TwqU50Oa3q2r66QhOmleoZQpQh8+/dfCSifaN00 >X-Microsoft-Antispam-Message-Info: > >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Revised Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg May 22, 2018

May 22, 2018

Team, please review and provide any thoughts, comments or changes. Alan

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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-Outreach] Revised Outreach Draft Report Section
by Alan Greenberg May 21, 2018

May 21, 2018

Attached please find a PDF of the document with line numbers to make commenting easier. Alan At 21/05/2018 12:02 AM, Alan Greenberg wrote: >Team, please review and provide any thoughts, comments or changes. > >Alan

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