Dear All, Pls find attached my comment in redlines Regards Arasteh 2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org>:
Hi
In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.
Matthew
On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all,
Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.
As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/ 1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit
Best regards,
Cheryl, Farzi, Steve
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