WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report
Dear all, Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest. As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBX... Best regards, Cheryl, Farzi, Steve --
Hi In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake. Matthew On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all,
Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.
As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBX...
Best regards,
Cheryl, Farzi, Steve
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Dear All, Pls find attached my comment in redlines Regards Arasteh 2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org>:
Hi
In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.
Matthew
On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all,
Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.
As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/ 1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit
Best regards,
Cheryl, Farzi, Steve
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Thank you, Mr. Arasteh and Matthew for the comments. I have made some changes to the document based on Matthew's comment and have accepted the useful changes Mr. Arasteh added to the document. I have tried to polish the document so had to make some minor changes and strike out one of the sentences that was changed. I hope that is ok. This document will be sent to the CCWG today. Best Farzaneh On 21 October 2016 at 21:51, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear All, Pls find attached my comment in redlines Regards Arasteh
2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org>:
Hi
In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake.
Matthew
On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote:
Dear all,
Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest.
As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/docu ment/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBXYpA/edit
Best regards,
Cheryl, Farzi, Steve
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Dear Farzaneh, Thanks for it. Please see the report in attachment. I made few style and typo edits. Best, Giovanni Giovanni Seppia External Relations Manager EURid Woluwelaan 150 1831 Diegem - Belgium TEL: +32 (0) 2 401 2750 MOB:+39 335 8141733 giovanni.seppia@eurid.eu<mailto:giovanni.seppia@eurid.eu> http://www.eurid.eu<http://www.eurid.eu/> Please consider the environment before printing this email. From: ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ws2-so_ac-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of farzaneh badii Sent: 24 October 2016 14:07 To: Kavouss Arasteh Cc: ws2-so_ac@icann.org Subject: Re: [Ws2-so_ac] WS 2 SO/AC Accountability progress report Thank you, Mr. Arasteh and Matthew for the comments. I have made some changes to the document based on Matthew's comment and have accepted the useful changes Mr. Arasteh added to the document. I have tried to polish the document so had to make some minor changes and strike out one of the sentences that was changed. I hope that is ok. This document will be sent to the CCWG today. Best Farzaneh On 21 October 2016 at 21:51, Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com<mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear All, Pls find attached my comment in redlines Regards Arasteh 2016-10-21 17:25 GMT+02:00 matthew shears <mshears@cdt.org<mailto:mshears@cdt.org>>: Hi In (1) I would bullet the tracks and use the actual track descriptions from WS2 just for clarity's sake. Matthew On 21/10/2016 15:56, farzaneh badii wrote: Dear all, Please find attached the preliminary progress report of the WS 2 group on SO/AC Accountability. Please send your comments, edits and responses within 48 hours as we need to finalize the report by Monday 24th October the latest. As a supplemental report, we might attach our work in progress document available here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WTRZZJ9B3Q6BHP6AlDHmoiep8NeshNpomBNM4bBX... Best regards, Cheryl, Farzi, Steve -- _______________________________________________ Ws2-so_ac mailing list Ws2-so_ac@icann.org<mailto:Ws2-so_ac@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ws2-so_ac -- -------------- Matthew Shears Global Internet Policy and Human Rights Center for Democracy & Technology (CDT) + 44 771 2472987<tel:%2B%2044%20771%202472987> ________________________________ [Avast logo]<https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaig...> This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. www.avast.com<https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaig...> _______________________________________________ Ws2-so_ac mailing list Ws2-so_ac@icann.org<mailto:Ws2-so_ac@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ws2-so_ac -- Farzaneh Disclaimer: This email and any attachment hereto is intended solely for the person to which it is addressed and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient or if you have received this email in error, please delete it and immediately contact the sender by telephone or email, and destroy any copies of this information. You should not use or copy it, nor disclose its content to any other person or rely upon this information. Please note that any views presented in the email and any attachment hereto are solely those of the author and do not necessarily represent those of EURid. While all care has been taken to avoid any known viruses, the recipient is advised to check this email and any attachment for presence of viruses. http://www.eurid.eu/en/legal-disclaimer
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farzaneh badii -
Giovanni Seppia -
Kavouss Arasteh -
matthew shears