Redline and clean version Final Report + updates slides
Dear all, Following yesterdays call please find included, the updates version of the slides: As discussed moved Finding slide is moved. Also adjusted language around concern future cohesion and quality of CSC Also included redline and clean version draft Final Report Major changes: Adjusted number of achieved metrics (from 8-> 9) Included process step of Public comment (page 5 and need to refine recommendation 2. Adjusted Recommendation 2. It now reads: The CSC provides appointing organisations with attendance records on a regular basis, at least every year in the month May, and where minimum attendance requirements are not being met, the Chair of the CSC formally notifies the appointing organisation. Included summary of public comments as ANNEX E Please ack changes. I’ll draft a note to be send to the respective Councils I will also draft a (courtesy) note for Chair ICANN Board and CEO ICANN and circulate it later. Kind regards, Bart
Thanks Bart. I actually started drafting something for the GNSO, attached if it spares you part of the effort…. Deadline for the agenda in March 3rd, essentially as a place holder the links can be added later. Questions/note I may have: - It there a need to mention/inform INFR of this report? - A note to Donna, will need a seconder, shouldn’t be a problem but RySG would be welcome - Links in motions should be persistent/stable, want to make sure https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/file is indeed persistent. Regards, Philippe From: CSC-EffectivenessRT [mailto:csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Thursday, February 28, 2019 3:09 PM To: Austin, Donna via CSC-EffectivenessRT Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Redline and clean version Final Report + updates slides Dear all, Following yesterdays call please find included, the updates version of the slides: As discussed moved Finding slide is moved. Also adjusted language around concern future cohesion and quality of CSC Also included redline and clean version draft Final Report Major changes: Adjusted number of achieved metrics (from 8-> 9) Included process step of Public comment (page 5 and need to refine recommendation 2. Adjusted Recommendation 2. It now reads: The CSC provides appointing organisations with attendance records on a regular basis, at least every year in the month May, and where minimum attendance requirements are not being met, the Chair of the CSC formally notifies the appointing organisation. Included summary of public comments as ANNEX E Please ack changes. I’ll draft a note to be send to the respective Councils I will also draft a (courtesy) note for Chair ICANN Board and CEO ICANN and circulate it later. Kind regards, Bart _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
Dear Bart, Dear Review Team Members, Attached, please find some proposed edits for consideration, which include: * 1 or 2 grammatical fixes * 2 corrections from “IANA functions” to “IANA Naming Function” so as to not create confusion and be clear that the CSC’s work is related to the IANA Naming Function only. * In the summary of consultations that the RT performed, added “ICANN” in a couple of places as the RT also conducted consultations with ICANN. * In the first paragraph of the introduction, suggested an edit to clarify that the PTI performs the IANA Naming Function under the IANA Naming Function Contract with ICANN. Best, Trang From: CSC-EffectivenessRT <csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Date: Thursday, February 28, 2019 at 6:12 AM To: "Austin, Donna via CSC-EffectivenessRT" <csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org> Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Redline and clean version Final Report + updates slides Dear all, Following yesterdays call please find included, the updates version of the slides: As discussed moved Finding slide is moved. Also adjusted language around concern future cohesion and quality of CSC Also included redline and clean version draft Final Report Major changes: Adjusted number of achieved metrics (from 8-> 9) Included process step of Public comment (page 5 and need to refine recommendation 2. Adjusted Recommendation 2. It now reads: The CSC provides appointing organisations with attendance records on a regular basis, at least every year in the month May, and where minimum attendance requirements are not being met, the Chair of the CSC formally notifies the appointing organisation. Included summary of public comments as ANNEX E Please ack changes. I’ll draft a note to be send to the respective Councils I will also draft a (courtesy) note for Chair ICANN Board and CEO ICANN and circulate it later. Kind regards, Bart
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Bart Boswinkel -
philippe.fouquart@orange.com -
Trang Nguyen