My review attached here as well. From: Martin Boyle [mailto:martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com] Sent: Wednesday, November 15, 2017 3:49 AM To: CSC-review@icann.org Cc: 'Bart Boswinkel' <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; Austin, Donna <Donna.Austin@team.neustar> Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Hi all, As suggested at our meeting in Abu Dhabi (and as Donna has reminded us in her first paragraph) I attach my first stab at incorporating changes. I hope this helps and look forward to our discussion tomorrow. Best Martin From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Austin, Donna via CSC-Review Sent: 14 November 2017 18:15 To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>>; CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Thanks Bart Could you provide a clean word version of the CSC Charter so that Keith, Martin, Abdulla and myself can review and suggest changes please. If I recall our discussion in Abu Dhabi, we thought it would be a good idea for each of us to individually review the Charter. Based on Elaine’s comments it would seem that the CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx is out-of-date. Could you please confirm? My preference moving forward is that the RT consider all the comments/input we’ve received, discuss the merits and then develop a redline of the Charter that we can share with the CSC and PTI before putting it out for public comment. Donna From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org<mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, November 10, 2017 3:50 AM To: csc-review@icann.org<mailto:csc-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart