Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart
Do we have a time fixed for the call on Thursday (16th), please? I currently have the afternoon blocked off for our discussion. I’d also note that there is supposed to be a PDP-Retirement call some time that day. From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: 10 November 2017 11:50 To: CSC-review@icann.org Subject: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart
Hello It appears that the proposed changes chart.docx is an outdated version. Please use the attached (V4). This also means the "CSC Charter with Notes August 2" is also outdated. Thanks On Fri, Nov 10, 2017 at 3:50 AM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> wrote:
Dear all,
Hope you home flight was uneventful.
Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements.
Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet).
Kind regards,
Bart
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Thanks Bart Could you provide a clean word version of the CSC Charter so that Keith, Martin, Abdulla and myself can review and suggest changes please. If I recall our discussion in Abu Dhabi, we thought it would be a good idea for each of us to individually review the Charter. Based on Elaine’s comments it would seem that the CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx is out-of-date. Could you please confirm? My preference moving forward is that the RT consider all the comments/input we’ve received, discuss the merits and then develop a redline of the Charter that we can share with the CSC and PTI before putting it out for public comment. Donna From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, November 10, 2017 3:50 AM To: csc-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart
Hi all, As suggested at our meeting in Abu Dhabi (and as Donna has reminded us in her first paragraph) I attach my first stab at incorporating changes. I hope this helps and look forward to our discussion tomorrow. Best Martin From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Austin, Donna via CSC-Review Sent: 14 November 2017 18:15 To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; CSC-review@icann.org Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Thanks Bart Could you provide a clean word version of the CSC Charter so that Keith, Martin, Abdulla and myself can review and suggest changes please. If I recall our discussion in Abu Dhabi, we thought it would be a good idea for each of us to individually review the Charter. Based on Elaine’s comments it would seem that the CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx is out-of-date. Could you please confirm? My preference moving forward is that the RT consider all the comments/input we’ve received, discuss the merits and then develop a redline of the Charter that we can share with the CSC and PTI before putting it out for public comment. Donna From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, November 10, 2017 3:50 AM To: csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart
My review attached here as well. From: Martin Boyle [mailto:martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com] Sent: Wednesday, November 15, 2017 3:49 AM To: CSC-review@icann.org Cc: 'Bart Boswinkel' <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; Austin, Donna <Donna.Austin@team.neustar> Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Hi all, As suggested at our meeting in Abu Dhabi (and as Donna has reminded us in her first paragraph) I attach my first stab at incorporating changes. I hope this helps and look forward to our discussion tomorrow. Best Martin From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Austin, Donna via CSC-Review Sent: 14 November 2017 18:15 To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>>; CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Thanks Bart Could you provide a clean word version of the CSC Charter so that Keith, Martin, Abdulla and myself can review and suggest changes please. If I recall our discussion in Abu Dhabi, we thought it would be a good idea for each of us to individually review the Charter. Based on Elaine’s comments it would seem that the CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx is out-of-date. Could you please confirm? My preference moving forward is that the RT consider all the comments/input we’ve received, discuss the merits and then develop a redline of the Charter that we can share with the CSC and PTI before putting it out for public comment. Donna From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org<mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, November 10, 2017 3:50 AM To: csc-review@icann.org<mailto:csc-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart
Dear Team, Sorry for responding late. I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting. I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow. Thank you Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> wrote:
Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review <https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review>
Thanks Abdalla From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Abdalla Sent: Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:34 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Cc: csc-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear Team, Sorry for responding late. I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting. I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow. Thank you Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer [cid:image001.jpg@01D35EBA.E37A7DE0] On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__mm.icann.org_mailman_listinfo_csc-2Dreview&d=DwMFAg&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=CwipU91YB6EkpFXK9ynnT_QUef4yC5p7jpsDm8cU97g&m=fjiPsFdpzCThWL2iq57occJJGn6tEoNmuk-JYz4BtbU&s=gBJdnzR3cil_R06Q44zT4HCoHesQWQVrqU5wnr83k5g&e=>
Hi all, Please find the recording for today’s call here: https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/ Abdalla, if it’s easier for you, the consolidated comments on the charter (and other related docs) can be found here: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB I’ve also uploaded the separate versions: Donna’s Comments, Martin’s Comments, and Clean version w/no edits. You may use the consolidated doc version to provide your comments, or on the clean version and I will consolidate it after – whichever you prefer. I will be sending two calendar invites now. As agreed, the 07 December call at 16:00 UTC. The second calendar invite is for the 14 December call with the CSC. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, Ria From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Austin, Donna via CSC-Review" <CSC-review@icann.org> Reply-To: "Austin, Donna" <Donna.Austin@team.neustar> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2017 at 12:12 PM To: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke>, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org" <CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material Thanks Abdalla From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Abdalla Sent: Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:34 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Cc: csc-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear Team, Sorry for responding late. I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting. I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow. Thank you Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> wrote: Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review
Thank you for info Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
On Nov 16, 2017, at 8:16 PM, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> wrote:
Hi all,
Please find the recording for today’s call here: https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/ <https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/>
Abdalla, if it’s easier for you, the consolidated comments on the charter (and other related docs) can be found here: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB <https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB> I’ve also uploaded the separate versions: Donna’s Comments, Martin’s Comments, and Clean version w/no edits.
You may use the consolidated doc version to provide your comments, or on the clean version and I will consolidate it after – whichever you prefer.
I will be sending two calendar invites now. As agreed, the 07 December call at 16:00 UTC. The second calendar invite is for the 14 December call with the CSC.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks, Ria
From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Austin, Donna via CSC-Review" <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Reply-To: "Austin, Donna" <Donna.Austin@team.neustar <mailto:Donna.Austin@team.neustar>> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2017 at 12:12 PM To: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke <mailto:ceo@kenic.or.ke>>, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org>" <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material
Thanks Abdalla
From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Abdalla Sent: Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:34 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Cc: csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material
Dear Team,
Sorry for responding late.
I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting.
I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow.
Thank you
Kind regards,
Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
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On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote:
Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__mm.icann.org_mailman_li...>
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Hello CSC Review Team, Friendly reminder, if you have additional feedback or comments to the charter, please find the consolidated copy attached. Different versions can also be found on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB Best, Ria From: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke> Date: Friday, November 17, 2017 at 9:00 AM To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org" <CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material Thank you for info Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer On Nov 16, 2017, at 8:16 PM, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> wrote: Hi all, Please find the recording for today’s call here: https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/ Abdalla, if it’s easier for you, the consolidated comments on the charter (and other related docs) can be found here: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB[community.icann.org] I’ve also uploaded the separate versions: Donna’s Comments, Martin’s Comments, and Clean version w/no edits. You may use the consolidated doc version to provide your comments, or on the clean version and I will consolidate it after – whichever you prefer. I will be sending two calendar invites now. As agreed, the 07 December call at 16:00 UTC. The second calendar invite is for the 14 December call with the CSC. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, Ria From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Austin, Donna via CSC-Review" <CSC-review@icann.org> Reply-To: "Austin, Donna" <Donna.Austin@team.neustar> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2017 at 12:12 PM To: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke>, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org" <CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material Thanks Abdalla From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Abdalla Sent: Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:34 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Cc: csc-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material Dear Team, Sorry for responding late. I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting. I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow. Thank you Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer <image001.png> On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> wrote: Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review <image001.png>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review
Hallo, I have gone through the consolidated document. I think Martin and Donna have done a good job. No further corrections from me. Thank you. Kind regards, Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
On Nov 28, 2017, at 10:22 PM, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> wrote:
Hello CSC Review Team,
Friendly reminder, if you have additional feedback or comments to the charter, please find the consolidated copy attached.
Different versions can also be found on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB <https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB>
Best, Ria
From: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke <mailto:ceo@kenic.or.ke>> Date: Friday, November 17, 2017 at 9:00 AM To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org <mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org>> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org>" <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Subject: [Ext] Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material
Thank you for info
Kind regards,
Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
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On Nov 16, 2017, at 8:16 PM, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org <mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org>> wrote:
Hi all,
Please find the recording for today’s call here: https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/ <https://participate.icann.org/p40mh7h238d/>
Abdalla, if it’s easier for you, the consolidated comments on the charter (and other related docs) can be found here: https://community.icann.org/x/RAlyB[community.icann.org] <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_x_R...> I’ve also uploaded the separate versions: Donna’s Comments, Martin’s Comments, and Clean version w/no edits.
You may use the consolidated doc version to provide your comments, or on the clean version and I will consolidate it after – whichever you prefer.
I will be sending two calendar invites now. As agreed, the 07 December call at 16:00 UTC. The second calendar invite is for the 14 December call with the CSC.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks, Ria
From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of "Austin, Donna via CSC-Review" <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Reply-To: "Austin, Donna" <Donna.Austin@team.neustar <mailto:Donna.Austin@team.neustar>> Date: Thursday, November 16, 2017 at 12:12 PM To: Abdalla <ceo@kenic.or.ke <mailto:ceo@kenic.or.ke>>, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Cc: "csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org>" <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: Notes and other material
Thanks Abdalla
From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Abdalla Sent: Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:34 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Cc: csc-review@icann.org <mailto:csc-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material
Dear Team,
Sorry for responding late.
I have just finished an 8 hour travel by road. I may not be in a position to join todays discussion. Please proceed with the meeting.
I will hand in my comments before close of business tomorrow if you allow.
Thank you
Kind regards,
Abdalla Omari. Chief Executive Officer
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On Nov 10, 2017, at 2:50 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org <mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote:
Dear all, Hope you home flight was uneventful. Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements. Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet). Kind regards, Bart <Customer Standing Committee Meeting with charter review team NOTES 16 October.docx><CSC Review Team Meeting NOTES 06October.docx><Proposed Changes - Chart.docx><CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx><Notes CSC meeting PTI Board members.docx>_______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__mm.icann.org_mailman_li...>
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