Dear IOTF Members: As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any. Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday. Regards, Trang
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document. Chuck -----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Dear IOTF Members: As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any. Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday. Regards, Trang
Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Thank you, Russ! We will make sure your edits are reflected in the version posted for public comment as well. Trang -----Original Message----- From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Date: Wednesday, June 1, 2016 at 1:29 PM To: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@verisign.com>, Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org> Cc: "iotf@icann.org" <iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck.
I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment.
Russ
Russ's edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org<mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Dear IOTF members, Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today. Regards, Yuko From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org> Cc: iotf@icann.org Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Russs edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com <mailto:cgomes@verisign.com> > wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org <mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Yuko, I just checked the currently open public comments page and couldnt find the RZERC Charter. Where is it posted? Chuck From: Yuko Green [mailto:yuko.green@icann.org] Sent: Friday, June 03, 2016 5:58 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Russ Housley; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org Subject: RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Dear IOTF members, Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today. Regards, Yuko From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org> Cc: iotf@icann.org Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Russs edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Good point. It is not on the IPC's radar screen to comment -- we reviewed the list of open comments and this was not on it. Greg On Wed, Jun 8, 2016 at 2:46 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:
Yuko,
I just checked the currently open public comments page and couldn’t find the RZERC Charter. Where is it posted?
Chuck
*From:* Yuko Green [mailto:yuko.green@icann.org] *Sent:* Friday, June 03, 2016 5:58 PM *To:* Gomes, Chuck; Russ Housley; Trang Nguyen *Cc:* iotf@icann.org *Subject:* RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF members,
Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today.
Regards,
Yuko
*From:* iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org <iotf-bounces@icann.org>] *On Behalf Of *Gomes, Chuck *Sent:* Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM *To:* Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; Trang Nguyen < trang.nguyen@icann.org> *Cc:* iotf@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Russ’s edits look good to me.
Chuck
*From:* Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com <housley@vigilsec.com>] *Sent:* Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM *To:* Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen *Cc:* iotf@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck.
I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment.
Russ
On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org <iotf-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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All, We needed to coordinate with NTIA before publishing the charter for public comment and that coordination is taking a little longer than usual so the charter was not posted last Friday as we had hoped. We will get it up as soon as possible and will let you know when it goes up. Trang From: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com<mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com>> Date: Wednesday, June 8, 2016 at 12:22 PM To: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Cc: Yuko Green <yuko.green@icann.org<mailto:yuko.green@icann.org>>, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>>, Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org<mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org>>, "iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org>" <iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Good point. It is not on the IPC's radar screen to comment -- we reviewed the list of open comments and this was not on it. Greg On Wed, Jun 8, 2016 at 2:46 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> wrote: Yuko, I just checked the currently open public comments page and couldn’t find the RZERC Charter. Where is it posted? Chuck From: Yuko Green [mailto:yuko.green@icann.org<mailto:yuko.green@icann.org>] Sent: Friday, June 03, 2016 5:58 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Russ Housley; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Dear IOTF members, Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today. Regards, Yuko From:iotf-bounces@icann.org<mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>>; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org<mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org>> Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Russ’s edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org<mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Thanks Trang. Chuck From: Trang Nguyen [mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org] Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2016 3:31 PM To: Greg Shatan; Gomes, Chuck Cc: Yuko Green; Russ Housley; iotf@icann.org Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter All, We needed to coordinate with NTIA before publishing the charter for public comment and that coordination is taking a little longer than usual so the charter was not posted last Friday as we had hoped. We will get it up as soon as possible and will let you know when it goes up. Trang From: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com<mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com>> Date: Wednesday, June 8, 2016 at 12:22 PM To: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Cc: Yuko Green <yuko.green@icann.org<mailto:yuko.green@icann.org>>, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>>, Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org<mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org>>, "iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org>" <iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Good point. It is not on the IPC's radar screen to comment -- we reviewed the list of open comments and this was not on it. Greg On Wed, Jun 8, 2016 at 2:46 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> wrote: Yuko, I just checked the currently open public comments page and couldn't find the RZERC Charter. Where is it posted? Chuck From: Yuko Green [mailto:yuko.green@icann.org<mailto:yuko.green@icann.org>] Sent: Friday, June 03, 2016 5:58 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Russ Housley; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Dear IOTF members, Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today. Regards, Yuko From:iotf-bounces@icann.org<mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>>; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org<mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org>> Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Russ's edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org<mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org<mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Dear all, The RZERC Charter is now published for the 30-day comment period. You may find the charter here: https://www.icann.org/public-comments/draft-rzerc-charter-2016-06-10-en Regards, Yuko From: Gomes, Chuck [mailto:cgomes@verisign.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2016 2:06 PM To: Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org>; Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> Cc: Yuko Green <yuko.green@icann.org>; Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; iotf@icann.org Subject: RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang. Chuck From: Trang Nguyen [mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org] Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2016 3:31 PM To: Greg Shatan; Gomes, Chuck Cc: Yuko Green; Russ Housley; iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter All, We needed to coordinate with NTIA before publishing the charter for public comment and that coordination is taking a little longer than usual so the charter was not posted last Friday as we had hoped. We will get it up as soon as possible and will let you know when it goes up. Trang From: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com <mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com>
Date: Wednesday, June 8, 2016 at 12:22 PM To: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@verisign.com <mailto:cgomes@verisign.com> > Cc: Yuko Green <yuko.green@icann.org <mailto:yuko.green@icann.org> >, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com> >, Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org <mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org> >, "iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> " <iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> > Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Good point. It is not on the IPC's radar screen to comment -- we reviewed the list of open comments and this was not on it. Greg On Wed, Jun 8, 2016 at 2:46 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com <mailto:cgomes@verisign.com> > wrote: Yuko, I just checked the currently open public comments page and couldnt find the RZERC Charter. Where is it posted? Chuck From: Yuko Green [mailto:yuko.green@icann.org <mailto:yuko.green@icann.org> ] Sent: Friday, June 03, 2016 5:58 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Russ Housley; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: RE: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Dear IOTF members, Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today. Regards, Yuko From:iotf-bounces@icann.org <mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com> >; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org <mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org> > Cc: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Russs edits look good to me. Chuck From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen Cc: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter Thanks Trang and Chuck. I agree with the changes made by Chuck. I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck. Se the attachment. Russ On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com <mailto:cgomes@verisign.com> > wrote:
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org <mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org <mailto:iotf@icann.org> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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Thank you, Chuck! All good edits and we will incorporate before posting the document for public comment. Trang -----Original Message----- From: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@verisign.com> Date: Wednesday, June 1, 2016 at 12:57 PM To: Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org>, "iotf@icann.org" <iotf@icann.org> Subject: RE: RZERC Charter
Thanks Trang. I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
Chuck
-----Original Message----- From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM To: iotf@icann.org Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
Dear IOTF Members:
As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
Regards,
Trang
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