Steve, I clicked the link provided and also found it be view only. If you can "update link sharing" to "comment" mode, that would be helpful. Alternately, you could send individual links to those who would like additional rights. Perhaps others are approaching this through a different link... Greg *Greg Shatan *C: 917-816-6428 S: gsshatan Phone-to-Skype: 646-845-9428 gregshatanipc@gmail.com On Thu, Feb 23, 2017 at 9:45 AM, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org> wrote:

Seun — everyone has the same “share” mode on that Google Doc, and other are actively making comments.

I am publishing a new one later today, with the review details in an Annex. Meanwhile, could you markup the Word Doc?

From: Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji@gmail.com> Date: Thursday, February 23, 2017 at 4:19 AM To: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org> Cc: "ws2-so_ac@icann.org" <ws2-so_ac@icann.org>, Brenda Brewer < mssi-secretariat@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ws2-so_ac] Updated draft 1.1 report for our call on 23-Feb

Hello Steve,

I am unable to make comments on the Gdocs as it seem to be in "view only" mode?

Regards

On Wed, Feb 22, 2017 at 3:48 AM, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org

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wrote:

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Thanks for the active reviewing that many of you have already done.

In the attached docs/PDF, I incorporated Google doc edits and comments provided thus far, by:

Tom Dale (GAC) Joan Kerr (NPOC) Juan Manuel Rojas (NPOC) Poncelelt Ileleji (NPOC) Anonymous

I also added review elements from the questionnaire response completed by the Registries Stakeholder Group (RySG). Our WG somehow did not receive the RySG response when it was circulated to staff on 19-Jan. (the RySG response is now posted on our wiki <https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=59643284>)

Here are ways you can continue to suggest edits: 1. Reply all with an email offering comments. 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc Draft 1.1 (use track changes, please). 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc Draft 1.1 (clean) at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDVHUW6p5bS_Zedq61fBl H7UFZ4LH6lmp462iaVI2Pw/edit?usp=sharing

From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org> Date: Monday, February 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM To: "ws2-so_ac@icann.org" <ws2-so_ac@icann.org> Cc: Brenda Brewer <mssi-secretariat@icann.org>, farzaneh badii < farzaneh.badii@gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr@gmail.com> Subject: Draft report for review before next call on 23-Feb

As promised on our last call, we consolidated all 3 tracks of our work into a single DRAFT report (PDF and MSWord attached).

We added links to the home page and charter of the 3 groups who did not respond to our questionnaire (RrSG, RySG and NPOC)

Please review and offer edits before our upcoming working group call on 23-Feb @ 05:00 UTC.

Here are some ways you can suggest edits before our call:

1. Reply all with an email offering comments. 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc (use track changes, please). 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc version at https://docs.google.com/document/d/14y1GB9vGhsWXVXtdtZmAj CWwzKVfrLfwDQYksrkDD94/edit?usp=sharing

On our call we can do first reading for our working group, and discuss edits and additions for our second reading a week later. If we can make that schedule work, we can offer our report to the CCWG Plenary at our face-to-face meeting at Copenhagen on 10-March.

Best, Steve, Cheryl, and Farzi

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