August 2011 - Rt4-whois - lists.icann.org

RFP status - received client references
by lynn＠goodsecurityconsulting.com Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

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AGENDA - Call on Wed, 3 Aug - 08:00 UTC
by Alice Jansen Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

Dear Review Team Members, Please find enclosed the agenda of your next call scheduled for this upcoming Wednesday at 08:00 UTC. 1) Adopt Preliminary reports (6 July + 27 July) for approval 1) Update from Lynn on references -- and proposal next steps 2) Update on chapters (chapter writers) 3) Update on comments (deep dive team) 4) Update on law enforcement questionnaire (Sharon and Peter) 4) Recommendations -- and what further recommendations seem to be arising from the work of a) the Implementation subteam reviewing compliance, b) the comments, and c) the Law Enforcement questionnaire. Kindly note that this agenda is also available on the wiki at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreview/Call+17+-+3+August+2011 Thanks, Very best regards Alice

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PREL REPs FOR APPROVAL - Call on Wed, 3 Aug
by Alice Jansen Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

Dear Review Team Members, Please find attached the preliminary reports of your teleconferences held on 6 July and 27 July. Kindly note that these will be discussed during your next conference call with a view to adopting a final version. Meanwhile, please feel free to email editing suggestions or requirements. Thanks, Very best regards Alice

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Follow up to the call
by Emily Taylor Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

Hi Olof Many thanks for taking on the follow up work while Alice is on holiday. These are the tasks I think we just agreed: 1. Please would you do a first pass on "bundling" the recommendations into related issues. Kathy and I can then review 2. Please would you liaise with Lynn who has the RT's authority to sign off the RFP once the deadline for comments has expired. I noticed a couple of typos, so would be grateful if you could also do a final proofread (I think you became Olaf again ;-)) 3. Alice has kindly forwarded links to documents on Applicable Laws and Producers/Maintainers to Sharon. Please would you follow up with Sharon if she has any further requests or would like to set up calls with those involved in the subteams covering those issues. 4. We would like to have a note of people's availability over the coming holiday period (Northern Hemisphere). This would be on the private wiki. Please would you organise this. Kind regards Emily PLEASE NOTE: from 30 June 2011 my contact details have changed (see below). [image: Emily Taylor Consultancy - Internet Governance] 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 • m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily(a)emilytaylor.eu www.etlaw.co.uk Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 730471. VAT No. 114487713.

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Our next call
by Emily Taylor Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

Hello everyone -- * * 76 Temple Road, Oxford OX4 2EZ UK t: +44 (0)1865 582 811 • m: +44 (0)7540 049 322 emily(a)emilytaylor.eu *www.etlaw.co.uk* Emily Taylor Consultancy Limited is a company registered in England and Wales No. 730471. VAT No. 114487713.

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Chapter on Scope of Work & Methodology
by Kathy Kleiman Aug. 2, 2011

Aug. 2, 2011

Hi All, Attached please find the sections I promised to draft on Scope of Work and Methodology. In preparing them, I used our Proposed Report Outline -- which provided important ideas for the chapter, as well as context for the chapters surrounding it. In an interesting situation, my chapter follows the Introduction (with the Whois background section between) and I found myself spending considerable time trying to write around what might (or might not) be in the Introduction. Since we have not yet drafted an introduction, I took the liberty of drafting some information that might be placed into it (or alternatively, moved back into Chapter 3 as a subsection of the writing attached). Finally, I combined proposed chapters 3 and 4 because Scope of Work and Methodology seemed to flow as a single unit. Please let me know what you think. Best, Kathy

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Chapters shortly en route
by Kathy Kleiman Aug. 1, 2011

Aug. 1, 2011

Hi All, I wanted to share that my chapters on Scope and Methodology are nearly complete, and after some additional review and revision tomorrow morning (Eastern time), I look forward to sharing them with you. Best, kATHY --

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