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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Executive Summary
by Alan Greenberg Aug. 23, 2018

Aug. 23, 2018

Thanks Erika. I've incorporated your changes. I have not attempted to rewrite the larger sections you drew attention to. There just is not enough time to do that now, and the Exec Summ will be subject to significant revision for the final report. I did make a few small changes though. The revised version, and I hope FINAL for this report, is attached. Alan At 22/08/2018 02:23 PM, Erika Mann wrote: >Hi Alan, hi Lisa - > >I reviewed the text and send you an invite to a Google doc. I didn't >send an invite to everyone because I'm aware that many of you can't >open a Google doc. > >Kind regards, >Erika > >On Wed, Aug 22, 2018 at 7:52 PM, Alan Greenberg ><<mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>alan.greenberg(a)mcgill.ca> wrote: >Please find attached some minor edits to the Executive Summary as >promised at Monday's meeting. > >Alan >_______________________________________________ >RDS-WHOIS2-RT mailing list ><mailto:RDS-WHOIS2-RT@icann.org>RDS-WHOIS2-RT(a)icann.org >https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt >

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Fwd: Consolidated Draft Report 17 August
by Dmitry Belyavsky Aug. 22, 2018

Aug. 22, 2018

Dear Lisa, I found a typo in the text of the Rec12 on page 72 of the draft report. It should be "ccTLD space" instead of "cold space ". Thank you! пт, 17 авг. 2018 г., 20:28 Lisa Phifer <lisa(a)corecom.com>: > Dear Review Team, > > > > Attached you will find a consolidated draft RDS-WHOIS2 review report for > your consideration, in Word and PDF formats. > > > > As noted in email sent by Alice earlier today, please review this > consolidated draft and raise any substantive concerns you may have on > recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list *ASAP > and no later than 26 August COB.* > > > > You will note that this consolidated draft does not contain redlines. If > you wish to see redlined edits made since 30 July, please refer to the > associated subgroup report posted on that subgroup’s wiki page. This > consolidated draft also includes copy-edits for consistency and grammar. If > you feel that a copy-edit accidentally changed the intent of any text in > your subgroup’s report, please flag that in comments on the consolidated > draft. If you wish to make comments in redline form, please be sure to > comment against the attached consolidated draft v1.8 17 August and not any > prior version. > > > > Finally, thanks all for your timely delivery of the many subgroup inputs > now incorporated into this draft. Thanks to your efforts, we’re now > entering the final stretch of our roadmap to public comment. > > > > Best, Lisa > _______________________________________________ > RDS-WHOIS2-RT mailing list > RDS-WHOIS2-RT(a)icann.org > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt > -- SY, Dmitry Belyavsky

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Executive Summary
by Alan Greenberg Aug. 22, 2018

Aug. 22, 2018

Please find attached some minor edits to the Executive Summary as promised at Monday's meeting. Alan

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Fwd: Consolidated Draft Report 17 August
by Lisa Phifer Aug. 22, 2018

Aug. 22, 2018

Dear all, A reminder that the deadline to raise comments on the RT's draft report is fast approaching. Here for your convenience are the relevant links: Draft Report, as posted for review on 17 August https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/64084100/RDS%20-%20Draft%2… Section 1.2, Recommendations List, including 20 August plenary call edits http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/e00fe677/R… Sections 9.4 & 5, ICANN Bylaws, updated issue/recommendation per plenary call http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180820/788eca6e/A… Please raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list ASAP to allow time for team review. The latest possible date to send comments is 26 August. Submitted comments are to be resolved on Monday's plenary call. Regards, Lisa ---------- Forwarded message --------- From: Lisa Phifer <lisa(a)corecom.com> Date: Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM Subject: Fwd: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August To: <lisaphifer(a)gmail.com> From: "Lisa Phifer" <lisa(a)corecom.com> To: "RDS WHOIS2-RT List" <rds-whois2-rt(a)icann.org> Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2018 10:46:28 -0600 Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] Consolidated Draft Report 17 August List-Id: <rds-whois2-rt.icann.org> List-Unsubscribe: < https://mm.icann.org/mailman/options/rds-whois2-rt>, < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=unsubscribe <rds-whois2-rt-request(a)icann.org?subject=unsubscribe>> List-Archive: < http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/> List-Post: < mailto:rds-whois2-rt@icann.org <rds-whois2-rt(a)icann.org>> List-Help: < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=help <rds-whois2-rt-request(a)icann.org?subject=help>> List-Subscribe: < https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt>, < mailto:rds-whois2-rt-request@icann.org?subject=subscribe <rds-whois2-rt-request(a)icann.org?subject=subscribe>> Dear Review Team, Attached you will find a consolidated draft RDS-WHOIS2 review report for your consideration, in Word and PDF formats. As noted in email sent by Alice earlier today, please review this consolidated draft and raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, and other content to the full RT mailing list *ASAP and no later than 26 August COB. * You will note that this consolidated draft does not contain redlines. If you wish to see redlined edits made since 30 July, please refer to the associated subgroup report posted on that subgroup’s wiki page. This consolidated draft also includes copy-edits for consistency and grammar. If you feel that a copy-edit accidentally changed the intent of any text in your subgroup’s report, please flag that in comments on the consolidated draft. If you wish to make comments in redline form, please be sure to comment against the attached consolidated draft v1.8 17 August and not any prior version. Finally, thanks all for your timely delivery of the many subgroup inputs now incorporated into this draft. Thanks to your efforts, we’re now entering the final stretch of our roadmap to public comment. Best, Lisa _______________________________________________ RDS-WHOIS2-RT mailing list RDS-WHOIS2-RT(a)icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt

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ICANN throwing more good money after the bad.
by Volker Greimann Aug. 21, 2018

Aug. 21, 2018

The saga continues: https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/litigation-icann-v-epag-icann-p… Will we be surprised by the results of this round? I doubt it! Best regards, Volker A. Greimann

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Action Item Responses from Alan
by Lisa Phifer Aug. 21, 2018

Aug. 21, 2018

Team, Attached are two documents containing action item responses from Alan. Each document contains redlined text for a recommendation from the affected section of the consolidated report. On Data Accuracy - Alan to produce note framing R5.1. On OECD related Bylaws amendment - Alan to produce language for BY.1 by COB today to propose replacement language. Agreement or proposed edits/objections to these revised recommendations are needed ASAP but no later than 26 August in preparation for next week's plenary call. Regards, Lisa

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Updated draft list of recommendations
by Lisa Phifer Aug. 21, 2018

Aug. 21, 2018

Team, As planned during today's plenary call, attached is an updated Section 1.2, Review Team Recommendations, with redlines indicating changes agreed during the call and also proposed in Alan's action item responses. *Any proposed edits or objections to these draft recommendations must be raised via email to the full RT in advance of the next plenary call - ASAP but no later than 26 August.* Regards, Lisa

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Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] AGENDA - Call #39
by Jean-Baptiste Deroulez Aug. 20, 2018

Aug. 20, 2018

Dear RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team Members, In anticipation of today’s plenary call, please find the slides attached. Kind regards, Jean-Baptiste From: RDS-WHOIS2-RT <rds-whois2-rt-bounces(a)icann.org> on behalf of Alice Jansen <alice.jansen(a)icann.org> Date: Friday, August 17, 2018 at 3:19 PM To: RDS-WHOIS2-RT <rds-whois2-rt(a)icann.org> Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] AGENDA - Call #39 Dear RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team Members, In preparation for your plenary call, scheduled for Monday, 20 August at 15:00-17:00 UTC, please find below the proposed meeting agenda: 1. Welcome, roll-call, Statement of Interests (2 min) 2. WHOIS1 Recs 5-9 – Data Accuracy (25 min) a) ICANN org clarifications – see https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/2018-August/000860.html b) b) Review/refine proposed R5.1 3. WHOIS1 Rec 4 & Objective 6 – Compliance (15 min) a) Review Volker's proposed changes to CM.2 4. Suggested Bylaw amendment: OECD ( 10 min) 5. Subgroup 3 - Law Enforcement Needs (10 min) 6. WHOIS 1 Rec 1 - Strategic Priority (5 min) 7. WHOIS1 Rec 11 - Common Interface (5 min) 8. Executive summary (15 min) 9. Address any objections/edits/comments submitted to the mailing-list to date (25 min) 10. Roadmap reminder (5 min) 11. A.O.B. (1 min) 12. Confirm action items and decisions reached (2 min) Lisa will be circulating the draft report shortly. Please remember to read it and to raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, content to the mailing-list ASAP and no later than 26 August – COB. Thanks! Kind regards Alice

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AGENDA - Call #39
by Alice Jansen Aug. 20, 2018

Aug. 20, 2018

Dear RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team Members, In preparation for your plenary call, scheduled for Monday, 20 August at 15:00-17:00 UTC, please find below the proposed meeting agenda: 1. Welcome, roll-call, Statement of Interests (2 min) 2. WHOIS1 Recs 5-9 – Data Accuracy (25 min) a) ICANN org clarifications – see https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/2018-August/000860.html b) b) Review/refine proposed R5.1 3. WHOIS1 Rec 4 & Objective 6 – Compliance (15 min) a) Review Volker's proposed changes to CM.2 4. Suggested Bylaw amendment: OECD ( 10 min) 5. Subgroup 3 - Law Enforcement Needs (10 min) 6. WHOIS 1 Rec 1 - Strategic Priority (5 min) 7. WHOIS1 Rec 11 - Common Interface (5 min) 8. Executive summary (15 min) 9. Address any objections/edits/comments submitted to the mailing-list to date (25 min) 10. Roadmap reminder (5 min) 11. A.O.B. (1 min) 12. Confirm action items and decisions reached (2 min) Lisa will be circulating the draft report shortly. Please remember to read it and to raise any substantive concerns you may have on recommendations, findings, content to the mailing-list ASAP and no later than 26 August – COB. Thanks! Kind regards Alice

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Apologies
by Cathrin Bauer Aug. 20, 2018

Aug. 20, 2018

Dear all, I’m on a bike tour and running very late due to bad weather so I will join late if I make it. Apologies. Best regards Cathrin

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